Friday, November 11, 2011

442. Meretun Terakhir

Pocketeers,
Sambungan dari 441. Meretun Keempat
finally...
(Pocket pun dah tak larat nak mengarang
dah ooiii ^^, tak larat nak dub dab dub dab)

... and the punishment goes on,
Maria cried and beg, trying to run she did,
but being invinsible just have its priviledges..
u can easily trip your victim and she'll land
right on her face.
let her be,
its not like all of her victims didnt cried,
didnt beg, didnt tried to run.
They were worst, they were terrified
of the 'unknown'. Atleast maria know
what is hitting her...
Her own hammer under her own cloak.

Her shirt is now torn..
She's bleeding here and there,
Her right hand shakes from the pain.
trying to keep her left hand still.
The bone in her left hand must be crushed now.
I did it just like how my school teacher did it to us
back then when we were taking UPSR.
When we were caught with long fingernails.
Titik jari ni! titik!!

'krak!krak! boommm!!!' the sound of the door
kicked down with police suddenly rushing in.
There must be 40 people coming.
Eh!! how do they know?
'sila menyerah! kamu telah dikepung!!'
They move in slowly with all the front guy
trying to fill in the space. Hey!!
they did their homework..
now even an invinsible guy also cant get out.

They aproached slowly and got the Pocket cornered.
Pocket smiled. here is his hero shot.
now he can tell the police what Maria
have been doing. The cloak is the proof.

'keteqaanngg!! keteng keteng keteng!'
he throw the hammer to the floor,
now visible to everybody else.
it was bloody.
it was freaky.
Hammer falling out of nothing is freaky.
The police was startled by this.
putting their gun even straighter.
They take one step... approaching the victim.


'toloong! tolong sayer cik.. tolong!' Maria
was trying to get to the police.
Her legs was not broken but yet
she's still trying to move using her
hand like those korean ghost movies.
ohh the drama...
wait seminit... drama ?
this ending? eh?

Bloody hammer with my fingerprint?
A girl as the victim just like all the victim before.
Me, a man.. cornered down by 40
policemen in a small laundry room.
Me, a man.. with my invinsible cloak.

Maria stopped halfway from the police,
acting like she could go no more.
The police kept on moving with their slow pace.
pointing their gun at 'nothing'

I walked..aproaching maria...
'u trapped me? how did u know?'
with her shaken voice and trembling lips.
'Linda.. she must have heard u...'
she paused to take her breath.
'...when u were warning me not to look at her...'
even though she was not facing me, i can still
see that she's smiling. Her pipi skin moved.
'u see pocket, the cloak only makes u invinsible...
but people can still hear u'
erkk?

'thanks pocket.. u cleared my name.. ehek ehek..'
her drama continues with blood coming out of
her mouth. The policemen aproached her slowly,
making sure no space in between.
making sure whatever it was they
were cornering could not pass.

ohh... abis lah pocket kali nii..
abis lah pocket kali niiiiii...
aku yang patutnya jadi Hero,
alih alih aku yang nak kena tangkap^^



xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx THE END xxxxxxxxxxxxx

so that was the dream pocketeers,
imagine how frustrated i was...
i was going to be the HERO.
But my sick demented mind
just wont let me... ohhhhh

15 comments:

Dhiya Fariza said...

awww dang it. kesian nya awwww frustrating gila :(

Pocket said...

Dhiya,
frustrating kan,
kiter punya mimpi,
bukan kiter jadi hero...
aduhlaaa...

Akue Achik said...

ending mcm ni....kalo sy bgun dr tdur gerenti trus bad mood...arghhhhhh

kajaharuna said...

hahahahah... cerita tipu kannn??

Pocket said...

Achik,
itulah, bangun terus menaip,
mata dok pejam tapi... ohh..

Kajaharuna,
sampai ati.. cerita betul tau!
mimpi jer la tapinyer...

Saiazuan said...

finally ends..hahaha :D

Aemy Shamy said...

never fail to amaze me how u can recall every single words in your dreams. hehe. agak frustrating la the ending...huhu. nasib baik its just a dream :p hehe.

zonaku said...

hati.............. itu puncanya...
miscalculate punya kes la ni......






padan muka!!!!!

Hanie_Dew said...

alaaaaaa....ending tak best..
aku bayangkan yg maria akan mati. pastu pocket akan terus guna that cloak to fight for justice. just like the gjost rider. muahahahahaha..tp biasa la mimpi tak selalu sebelahkan kite.

hooaaaa..tak tido aku baca komen kau pocket. jgn ckp kuat kuat. malu. hahahahaha...

Hanie_Dew said...

pocket. aku baca komen ko kat blog zuan.

ala ckap je apa ko nak ckap. zuan pun kata xde pe nak ckp tp ckap jugak. hahahahaha. kan dah ade ape nak ckp tu.

sory kalau ko pening baca komen ni. sengaja. =D

littledolphin said...

apa ni?! *tak puas hat*

~waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

nak ending lain T_______T

Pocket said...

Saiazuan,
umph! off to the next story plak:D

Aemy,
well in the dream,
she was talking in japanese,
i have to translate of course.
not the exact translation.
but the same meaning.

Zonaku,
aper plak padan muka pocket plak?
tak padan la weh!
bukan pocket yg jahat pung!

Hanie,
hahah, sampai tak tido!!
nanti pocket buat satu entry terus,
moga insomnia terus kamu pas tu :)

yes, pocket dok syok dah masa dapat baju tu,
dok bayangkan apa yg buleh dibuat.
tp sayang seribu kali sayang..

Vlog kalau tunjukkan pocket abiskan 3 bijik double cheese jer tak leh ker? :D

ShaheerahHana,
okeh,
nanti pocket sambung.
cerita macam mana pocket bleh lari dari
penjara plak.. saper selamatkan pocket?
haaaa.. yang ni kita tak tau.. :)

Jue said...

Urghh! Ending gini la yg slalu blaku kat filem hollywood..ksian sungguh ending..siut je c maria tu nama trus cleared
Eh ko nak vlog gak eh. Uish!best!bile neh nak wat

Hanie_Dew said...

"Vlog kalau tunjukkan pocket abiskan 3 bijik double cheese jer tak leh ker? :D" >>> boleh boleh...dengan syarat hantar dulu double cheese burger tu kat kitrg utk kitrg hanyati bersama sambil tgk vlog ko tu pocket.

rozeeta rashid said...

alaa. apa ending mimpi macam ni!! tido balik! kot2 ada sambungan lagi. haha.